יום שישי, 22 בפברואר 2013

A letter To Mr. Cattanzara


A letter To Mr. Cattanzara

Dear Mr. Cattanzara,
Hi, how are you? You wouldn't believe what happen to me all those years.
Thanks to you I read the books and even enjoyed them. Now I am a successful businessman and I own a technology company. I have a beautiful wife and two children, we live happily in Los Angles.  Fortunately, I have a big house with a pool and a new Porsche.
My father and I got closer and we even work together. Sophie became a lawyer and she is about to get married with a well known doctor.
I think about you every day and I will never forget you. I achieved a lot in my life and it is because of you, the man how always believed in me when I didn't.
I would like to invite you to Sophie's wedding next week at the Hilton Hotel, in New York. After the wedding you should come and stay in my house for the weekend.
Yours,
George.

Very good work.
(94)
Daphna 


יום חמישי, 14 בפברואר 2013

Bridging Text And Context

Bridging Text And Context

The story "A Summer's Reading" takes place in a poor neighborhood. The population includs simple people who are not educated. Some of them are immigrants who have hopes and dreams alongside people who are not ambitious.
The writer introduces two characters- Mr. cattanzara and George, who are awkward and isolated. Mr. cattanzara is different, because he is curious and intelligent. He reads The New York Time and books, whereas others sit without doing anything.  In addition, George is strange and doesn't fit in society, because he doesn't work and has no education. He prefers to be alone, isolated from the environment.
Unfortunately, Mr. cattanzara, who is older. has no hopes and dreams. He is sorry for the mistakes he has made. However, George who is young, can still attain the American middle-class dream to acquire education. In the end of the story, George takes responsibility for his life and decides to make a change to acquire eduacation.
The background information helps us to understand the story better and connect to the characters. We, the readers, can relate to the characters' motives and be sympathetic.
Excellent work
(100)
Daphna