יום שישי, 28 בספטמבר 2012

A Letter to the Newspaper

A Letter to the Newspaper
Dear editor,
My name is George Eliot, from warwickshire, England. I'm a young poet and I write about the English society.
Unfortunately, it is divided into classes, the lower class lives in poverty, while the upper class lives a luxurious life. The poor children are sent to work in factories to help their families.
In my opinion, children should go to school and acquire education. I believe it unworthy that children work for hours without any break. In addition, the employers treat the children disrespectfully and use them.
Therefore, I would expect from your respectable newsapepr to increase the awareness among the English society that children belong to educational institutions. When I wrote the poem "Count That Day Lost" I meant that people would seize the day and do good deeds, so our society would be better. I think that if we allow our children to acquire an education, our society will blossom and have intellectual people, and the gaps would certainly decrease.
Sincerely yours,     
George Eliot

Excellent
(100)
Daphna

יום שבת, 15 בספטמבר 2012

Count That Day Lost

Make a difference
Mary Ann Evans was an English poet, who lived in the Victorian age. The society was divided into classes and the gaps were huge.
At that time women were discriminated and weren't taken seriously. Mary was a strong woman. She wanted to make a difference, and decided to make a change.
The poem "Count That Day Lost" reflects her wish to change the society. She hoped that people would behave nicelly and kindlly. She wished for a better society that would respect women as well.
She wanted people to do good deeds and make the most of it. However, if people don't seize the day, it is considered a waste of time.
In conclusion, Mary expresses her wishes and hopes through the poem and the readers can relate to her personality.
Shir Gilkarov.
Excellent!.
(95)
Daphna