A Different Ending

A Different Ending

Mr. Ramsay handed the chain to Mr. Kelada thinking that the pearls weren't real. He was wondering what Mr. Kelada would say. Mr. Kelada took a magnifying glass from his pocket and examined the chain carefully. He was shocked because he knew that the pearls were expensive and unique.

Suddenly, Mrs. Ramsay started to cry and it looked like she was about to faint. At that moment, Mr. Ramsay realized that his wife was liying to him the whole year.

"I can't take it any more, I have done a terrible thing, I feel ashamed", Mrs. Ramsay said.

Mr. Kelada was embarassed and didn't know what to say and do for the first time.

Surprisingly, Mr. Ramsay took the chain from Mr. Kelada's trembling hands and threw it to the ocean.   

"I guess I deserve it, I had an affair in New York, I was liyng the whole time because I was afraid to lose you", Mrs. Ramsay said. 

At that moment, I entirely didn't like Mrs. Ramsay, how could I be so wrong about her. she looked so modest... 

I came to the conclusion that looks can be misleading. 

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Daphna

Reflection

Reflection

1. I enjoyed reading this story because there is a strong messaage that I relate to.

In addition, I liked Mr. Kelada and I think that he is an interesting character.

2. I was suprised to find out that the narrator has changed his opinion about Mr. Kelada.

Maybe he became softer and flexible towards people who are different than him.

3. Due to the skills of Explaining Patterns and Uncovering Motives I understood the story better since it emphasized the characters beliefs and their motives. For example, when the narrator said in the story "I was prepared to dislike Mr. Kelada even before I knew him" it shows that the narrator is prejudiced and judgjemental. He doesn't give anychance to people who are not the same as he.

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Daphna